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Don't worry. It doesn't suck. It's an awesome motivator and a great speech. Very original one, too! I like it a lot. When you're feeling down, read this. Though there are some problems that could be fixed. 1. Your poem is too much like a paragraph, try spacing it out. 2. In the first stanza, you rep...


Though I fully agree with this poem, war will never be fully stopped, as long as peace is apparent. There will always be conflicts, sadly. "War doesn't determine who's right, war determines who's left" - Bertrand Russell. I understand your vision, and it will impact many people, but many people have...


This is a very nice poem, with great word choice. It is a nice free-verse poem, with rhymes as well, although the laddering effect of the 'one day' is a bit too exaggerated. A very original piece of work, and it will impact many people. The word 'epitaph' is a bit over-the-top, I do not know if you ...

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SolidMars Featured By Owner 3 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
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thank you kindly for the fav dear :tighthug:
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Theopenpage Featured By Owner 5 days ago  New member
Thankyou for the favourite on my latest poem. I hope you enjoyed it :)
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PlaviDemon Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Thanks for fave and Watch me for more arts :)
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DrippingWords Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Writer
:huggle: Thanks for the fave(s)! :huggle:
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SolidMars Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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thank you kindly for the favs dear :tighthug:
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