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Don't worry. It doesn't suck. It's an awesome motivator and a great speech. Very original one, too! I like it a lot. When you're feeling down, read this. Though there are some problems that could be fixed. 1. Your poem is too much like a paragraph, try spacing it out. 2. In the first stanza, you rep...


Though I fully agree with this poem, war will never be fully stopped, as long as peace is apparent. There will always be conflicts, sadly. "War doesn't determine who's right, war determines who's left" - Bertrand Russell. I understand your vision, and it will impact many people, but many people have...


This is a very nice poem, with great word choice. It is a nice free-verse poem, with rhymes as well, although the laddering effect of the 'one day' is a bit too exaggerated. A very original piece of work, and it will impact many people. The word 'epitaph' is a bit over-the-top, I do not know if you ...

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DrippingWords 2 days ago  Student Writer
:huggle: Thank you so much for the fave(s)! :huggle:
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myriadwhitedarkness 3 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the :+fav: !
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SearingBlaze000 Apr 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
ou got hugged :iconplzhug: !!!!!!!!!!!!! 
Spread the DA love around! (you can copy and paste this message on their userpage!) 

RULES:
1- You can hug the person who hugged you! 
2- You -MUST- hug 6 other people, at least! 
3- You should hug them in public! Paste it on their page! 
4- Random hugs are perfectly okay! (and sweet) 
5- You should most definitely get started hugging right away! 

Send This To All Your Friends, And Me If I Am 1. 
If You Get 7 Back You Are Loved! 
1-3 you're a bad friend! 
4-6 you're an ok friend! 
7-9 you're a good friend! 
10-& Up you're a great friend!
 
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Thank you for adding my poem "My Shed Loyalty" to your favorites. I greatly appreciate this, and i apologize for not responding sooner.
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days-be-strange Feb 10, 2014  Student Writer
Thanks  for the fave Heart 
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